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What is your opinion?

Intrigued…

"I am so intrigued on the makings of Codex… especially now that he can communicate. I wonder how this will affect the Dark Lord’s plans. I am assuming this is something he wanted as he gave him the spell. What are his intentions? "

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Awesome job.

"I really hope that you continue this story. I was hooked from like the second or third sentence."

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The question

" Victus the necromancer and Codex "dem bones that done come alive". The 2 chapters certainly reveal writing skills in storyline and character development. Will there be a Redemptive theme? An army for ruthless conquest or a noble adventure for good? What say ye?"

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the communicating skeleton

"I really liked the idea of a skeleton communicating. next time maybe start a bit before the event."

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