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Sugar Punch

"What an amazing story. Maddox and Theo’s journey was difficult but also beautiful. They both really went through a lot of hard things in their own lives as well as when they got together. I think the main point of this story is never giving up and neither of them did. I’m so happy everything worked out for them because a few times I was heartbroken. This story is a roller-coaster of emotions but so worth it. Wonderful job author. 💞🩷💞"

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Sugar Punch

"Job well done, great read👏👏"

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Just amazing 😻

"I enjoy every bit of it. I hope there’re still more amazing stories like this coz I can’t get enough💯❤️"

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Well written, exciting story

"I like the plot even if the main plot twist was somewhat predictable. The character development makes this story realistic and an exciting read too. I would recommend it to people who like a slower burn, realistic love story between two guys who are just discovering love as it happens."

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Sugar Punch

"Enjoyed your story very much. Too sweet. Great job 👏 "

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Sugar punch

"Enjoyed it tremendously definitely recommend it "

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Sugar Punch

"Maddox and Theo are a beautiful couple. So glad they ended up together! "

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Sugar punch

"I love the story and the characters"

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Sugar Punch

"Well, this story punches you right in all of the feels! I don't get hooked often but man I was hooked on this. Author, you wrote a wonderful story about two completely different people falling in love with each other, who stupidly let their fears and others force their relationship to change, along with having them grow so much, wish there is another bonus chapter out, or another book on what happens next. Great writing cannot wait to see what else you create. FYI you should try and publish this in paperback or on eBook it's that good. I can read past your errors as they didn't bother me and it didn't hinder myself while reading as I could see what you were trying to say. "

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Whoa!

"I absolutely loved this story. And the way Maddox was given so much insight and Theo showed him compassion. I am amazed. This is the first Boy love story I've ever read and I'm glad it is. Thank you for sharing Theo and Maddox's love story with us."

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Love ❤️

"I absolutely love Theo and Maddox! This story is incredible start to finish, the plot and characters. Definitely worth reading more than once. "

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Brilliant

"Love this story can’t wait for the rest 💕"

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Compelling

"There are few stories on this app that made me forget everything else and keep on reading like this one. It needs editing sometimes but you easily forget it because of how you want to know how the relationship evolves. They're so endearing in their own way, I'm loving every moment of this !"

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Love this story

"Was a fantastic story. I'm sad that it's over."

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Phaa

"Its amazing i love it plz update even 4 pages plzzzzz "

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