Prologue
The moon burned too bright that night.
Auric felt it the moment Leila’s labor began. The air was thick, charged with something other, something ancient. Outside, the Glen River wolves stirred, unease rippling through them like a silent warning.
Inside the packhouse, Leila lay pale and trembling, her golden eyes sharp even through the pain.
“It’s time,” she whispered, squeezing his hand.
Auric knelt beside her, his heart pounding. “You’re sure?”
Leila let out a breathless, pained laugh. “Do I look unsure?”
Fifteen minutes later, the midwife arrived. A veteran of countless births, she moved with practiced efficiency—but something was different. Her sharp gaze flickered to the window, to the moon that hung heavy and watchful in the night sky.
She murmured a quiet prayer before pressing a cool cloth to Leila’s brow. “A full moon birth is a rare gift, Luna. The Goddess watches.”
Leila exhaled sharply, sweat slicking her brow. “Then I hope she watches closely.”
The labor was brutal. Hours passed in a blur of pain and blood, the scent of iron thick in the air. Auric never left her side, whispering reassurances, pressing kisses to her damp forehead. He would have taken her pain if he could. Would have borne it himself, gladly.
And then, after one final, agonizing push—silence.
A newborn’s cry should have filled the room. Instead, the hush stretched unbearably.
Auric’s breath caught. His eyes darted to the midwife, whose face had gone rigid with something close to fear.
Then, suddenly—
Not a cry. A howl.
Small, but wild. Instinctive. Powerful.
The sound rang through the packhouse, rippling outward like a shockwave. Outside, the wolves lifted their heads, responding instinctively, their spines straightening as if something inside them recognized the moment for what it was.
Power.
Auric turned to Leila, stunned. She was watching him, her exhaustion overshadowed by something else—something like awe. She reached for the infant, and though the midwife hesitated, she placed the child into her arms.
Leila traced a trembling finger along the baby’s cheek. “Alexandra,” she whispered, voice soft with wonder. “Lex.”
She held her close, just for a moment, then turned her gaze to Auric.
“She’s more than we ever imagined,” she murmured. “The Goddess sent her for a reason.”
And then her breath hitched.
Auric’s world tilted as crimson bloomed beneath her, dark and endless.
“No—” His voice was raw, his grip tightening around her. “Stay with me, Leila. Stay with me.”
The midwife shouted for her assistant. Someone tried to move Auric, but he refused to let go.
Leila’s lashes fluttered, her golden eyes locking onto his.
“She’s yours now,” she breathed.
And then she was gone.
Auric did not remember the moment they took Lex from his arms, only that the absence of Leila felt like a physical wound, as if something had been carved from his chest.
He grieved. Goddess, how he grieved.
In those first days, he was a shadow, drifting through the packhouse in silence. The world had lost its color. The weight of duty pressed against his ribs, suffocating, relentless.
But then—Lex.
She was so small, so helpless without the mother she would never know. When she whimpered in the night, he felt it in his soul. When she was placed into his arms, her tiny fingers curling into his chest, something inside him cracked open.
She smelled of Leila. Wore her mother’s eyes like echoes.
But she was more than memory. She was becoming.
His daughter. His anchor.
“I don’t know how to do this without her,” he murmured, voice threadbare and shaking, a confession in early morning hours to his newborn daughter in his arms.
Lex didn’t understand, couldn’t possibly, but she blinked up at him with wide, searching eyes—so full of trust.
And in that stillness, something in him shifted.
She was his.
Theirs.
The reason his heart still beat in the ruins.









You do a wonderful job building the plot in the first chapter and giving us a good picture of the world and system you’ve created. Plus very suspenseful and thrilling I’m excited to see what else you bring. However i’ve noticed a few grammar mistakes. When you use dialogue you tend not to capitalize the next sentence for a few of them. I would just go back and fix those :) otherwise great first chapter. I can’t wait to read more and leave feedback.