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Keep writing

"I love the story. Please don't stop writing. I can't wait to finish the whole story. "

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Mafia lords revenge possession

"Good story telling"

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post the other chapters as well

"i loved the story and was able to read it till chapter 59 but after that i have no resource through which i could enjoy it All other platforms ask for money but i want it for free so could you please upload other parts as well"

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Good

"Good rear not yet finished "

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Very good plot so far. Everything is ok. I will continue reading

"I like everything so far. It is a good book to read"

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The mafia lords revenge possession

"I love the story line Love the writting So interesting "

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Evergreen

"Book starts out good would recommend to anyone who likes mafia novels. Not happy that its not finished"

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The Mafia lord revenge possession

"Please update soon and let the 🥵🥵🥵🥵🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💙💙💙💙💙 begin."

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The mafia lords revenge possession

"Loved it.Cant wait to read more."

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Good story

"Story started good but gets long winded and loses plot. Feels like it’s not getting to the point "

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My Mafia Lord’s Revenge Possession

"Can’t put it down. It’s so good. Can’t wait to see what will happen next. "

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Fantastic

"I absolutely loved reading this book and i can not wait to find out what happens next thank you for such a good book "

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The mafia lord’s revenge

"This is that book you start and can’t put it down till you reach the very last letter, it’s amazing, if you are a sucker for mafia please join the ride, I can’t wait "

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Great

"Lovely is all i can say"

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The mafia lord's revenge possesion

"Looking gorward to next chapters"

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The Mafia Lord’s Revenge Protection

"I loved this story, the plot, the author’s writing style and the characters. I loved the interaction between the two main characters. I can’t wait to see how their relationship develops. Please give us more chapters. "

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Amazing

"Wowwww...love it"

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Grammar and writing style

"The grammar needs a lot of work. The writing/storylines are kind of not relatable especially the characters describing themselves in a arrogant way "

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There are a few spelling and grammar errors but overall I am enjoying this novel. Would to read to read the completion of it .

"Love the plot. Would like know what he plans to do with his possession, if he falling for her? Who ok aid the TV guy to print the lies?"

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Good

"I like the story. it just has typos, or least that's what I think they are."

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