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Good work!

"I've read the DemonFall series, and have concluded that the brand new MM series is Overton's best work yet. Good plot, better characters, and I absolutely love Erased, so this story hit me in all the right spots. The protagonist is also quite cool, having just the right amount of strength, compassion, and courage. I cannot see a better work of Overton's. Looking forward to the completion of the sequel! Don't let us down!"

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Interesting plot

"The plot of Multiverse Mischief has an interesting and appealing plot. This story has a lot of potential if it is fleshed out properly. We really don't know anything about the main protagonist and why he is making some choices, but I am sure it will be a greater story if the author takes her time installing the story's background and justifying the characters' choices. "

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