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A must read

"Very captivating story, the world is very developed, and the characters are very compelling. Please keep writing"

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Concubine 999

"Excellent story so far. It’s very unique in the world building and the plot of the story. I hope this author continues with their story so we can see how the plot continues to build. "

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I like it

"Well written and intriguing so far. "

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Concubine 999

"I liked it so far,great plotting and i love the author style of writing...bit disappointed it's not updated recently but i'll give it a solid 9.5😉😪✌🏿"

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Concubine 999

"Interesting I find this book really interesting and i enjoy reading every chapter. I just wish the updates were in a more regular fashion. So far though, the book is amazing🤩."

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Concubine 999

"I enjoyed it!"

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Nice

"I Like it, it is good, pleas more. "

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Compelling so far

"It's easy to think that a story about a galactic emperor's concubine might not go anywhere on the face of it, although the fact that she's the 999th should cause some intrigue, I happy to report that I couldn't be more wrong. A driving narrative with a compelling plot and questions to be answered, well-written characters and settings make this a great read even after only five chapters, with some suspense left at the end of chapter five to have you asking even more questions. I am well and truly hoping this gets finished, mainly just to see if these lingering questions find their resolutions. Good stuff so far, Zephyr Zane!!!"

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Good

"It's a bit of a slow starter but I'm sure it's about to get very interesting. Love the characters "

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