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"This story, plot, writing, chracters, backstories everything is just soooo magical and captivating, specially your writing style is sooo damn good, it creates suspence, imaginations and real scenes in mind which make the story nore vivid and feelable. I just freaking love this and everything about it. I found this story by chance but once i started reading it, it became my favourite and now i cant stop reading it. My fav chracter so far is cycus and gio, i also like the brothers,and anna bcz they had their circumstances and they are also victims somewhere, children who kust wanted love, care and attention. I like vlad a lott too bcz of his loving character for his sister and strong character. Leonid is fine but his wife and younger daughter alizay are also very amusing characters. I also think that seraphina is quite lucky in friendship bcz eventhough she did suffer due to blood relationships but she got loyal subordinates like cyrus and gio who support her everywhere anytime and are her brothers, her friends whether they r from her childhoon who got killed, or from now, and alexendra and her teammates,they are all loyal to her and love her just as she is and values her. So i kinda think she is lucky too and i fucking love her character and determination. She is a great inspiration and from reading her character and this story i learned a lot things, but most prominently was the word "fucking" in every sentence😅🤣. Aside from joke i freaking love this story and am love in with this. Totally support u and encourage u to continue. Thanks for giving us such a masterpiece -tokumei"

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Update

"I can't wait to find what happens next I love this story"

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Dawn

"This story has more twists and turns than a mountain road keep it up"

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unwanted twin

"you have done it again lovely book great twists and all you had me in tears and all but cant wait for the end "

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Unwanted Twin

"I'm on team Seraphina I wish she gets her revenge on her sister and brothers till they regret what they did to her!!"

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This is beautiful I think I cried throughout the whole chapter . I NEED MORE 🥺🥺🥺 PLEASE 🙏

"The way I am drawn to this novel is concerning I think I am addicted 😂 I love it 💞"

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Unwanted twin

"I love this book so much the plot is amazing and the detail in the writing is better than most books i have read. I chose this rating because the plot of this book is the best i have read. the characters are detailed and there is so much action and i love it."

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Good read

"So far I really like this novel it’s different from the normal story line of abused sister they love her they find out etc. the brothers and sister still hate her I hope she makes them suffer like she has I’m half way in the story and really feel for the character. Great read thanks to the author "

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Unwanted twin

"Love the novel soo much, that I've waited for months for the updates. Ree plots the story in such a good way that, the feeling is that I want the story to end soon, so i can read the whole novel fast. But I don't want it to end.... So overall the story is amazing with full of suspenseful moments. Like it very much. 💗💗💗💗💗☺😊 actually I'm happy with it."

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I loved it the plot was just chef’s kiss❤️

"I’m didn’t like that it wasn’t very long (I love books) I loved the way you right n stuff And yeah loved this novel😼❤️"

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Heartbreakingly beautiful

"Seraphim is the broken heroine in this story. The phoenix that rises from the ashes. The story line is incredible, deep and dark. The only issue? The book isn't updated as frequently as I would love it, but we all have things in the outside world too. Love the work "

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The unwanted twin

"VERY GOOD STORY. AM LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR BOOKS. THE GRAMMER NEEDS A LITTLE WORK BUT THAT IS A MINOR PROBLEM. PLEASE UPDATE. SOONER. LOTS OF LOVE."

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Great read

"Excellent plot. Though I have to ask...will you be completing the story and when...also it would be great to have pop's of other characters especially the brothers and Vlad..."

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Great story

"The story is great and interesting but please update soon!"

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Unwanted twin

"I really loved this book I hope there is another one"

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I'm in Awe

"This author has this novel that I could not put down. I hate reading books that are not finished and continue. With this one, I couldn't help myself. This is some really good, very good writing. I started reading at a very young age like a single digit. I'm now in my late 50's so I can honestly say, I have read loads of books, every genre. I have my favorite authors who I continuously go and read their books again and again while waiting for a new one. I seriously believe this author will be added to my short favorite author list. Thank God I did not read one, assault weapons or any stupid other words those not educated in guns use. That's why my favorite list is short. I need authors who have researched and do not write something like, "she tripped over a young doe, her eyes closed in death." I threw that book over my shoulder. If I trip over a deer and it's eyes are closed, I'm going to pray she doesn't stomp me. That is just an example, maybe I'm too restricted in what I like. However, I love this book so far and can't wait for more. I just hope it doesn't go on for hundreds (600+) of chapters instead of picking the perfect spot for the ending. So please get to writing, this is so good"

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UNWANTED TWIN

"The plot is so good I wanted to read it all had to go to work so I have to read a little at a time. i need to read the ending. there are so many plots and twist in this story."

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Enjoy It

"I love this story so far and can't wait to see what happens next. Good Job, love! "

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Amazing read

"Great plot and girl empowering. I laughed, hate, cried and loved the story. Next chapters please...😘"

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Unwanted Twin

"This story made me cry a full bucket, all to the way to the beginning. The plot is 5/5, a lot of twists and is just full of surprises. Keep up the good work, and please update soon, cause to be honest I'm soul-attached to this story."

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