seven deadly tins

"Puerile with spattering of dad jokes, but that belies a well crafted story. To bring this type of story off it is essential to be as true to life as possible and in this the author is able to draw on interpersonal relationships which work really well and help to give veracity and validity to the tale. Bullying and family reactions add weight to this. In general details especially of actions are well thought through, but I can't say that I was convinced every time. I recall one instance of Luli being written as LuLu, and on another 'in vain' was rendered as 'in vein'. This may or may not be the work of a genius but it is a valiant attempt at a difficult exercise. "