Inkitt
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please upload more chapters i am dying to know more

"you are the best writter please uploadore chapters please"

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This dynamic

"I love these character dynamics. I enjoy reading that Alaric is opening up more within his marriage. "

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Frickin amazing lovely writing amazing plot scrumptious sex

"frickin amazing I need more"

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The Dark Knight

"You're A great Author with a great offering from this author, look forward To be able to read more. And I hope she has more chapters to offer us."

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I really like this

"I really like this book so far, i think there are a few grammatical errors but nothing that affects the sotry line. I do like the cat and mouse game of the plot of the story. Can’t wait to see what turns happen to make feelings start to bloom for real!"

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It’s getting hot in here 🥵

"This book is exactly what I was looking for a true enemies to lovers not that fake slight dislike/annoyance in other books. The chemistry between the main characters is so palpable! Amazing job can’t wait for the rest! "

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Enemies to Lovers

"An enemies to lovers story as strategic as a chess game. Alaric's advances are calculated due to his status as knight commander/general of a great army. Elise weilds her words and body but her foe always seems one step ahead. Since both are stubborn as iron, I wonder who will soften first 🤔"

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The Dark Knight

"This book is a wonderful read! I'm literally obsessed with it. Can't recommend it enough."

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The dark knight

"Honestly this is probably the best book I’ve read on here, it feels like I’m reading from someone who has already written previous books, there’s a couple misspelling but it’s so few and far between that it’s not noticeable, I wish there was a more detailed story for the fight scene, but other then that if I knew anyone who loved books as much as me I’d recommend this to all of them, I can’t wait for more!"

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Perfect!!!

"Perfect writing! Please write more stories for us!!!!"

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Simply superb

"Liked the style of writing, character development and everything about the story."

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Please another chapter

"Please the next chapter "

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I love you! Thank you! I believe there will be sooner or later 30 plus commnets darling! 🔥

"10 out of 10"

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AHHHH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH I NEED MORE!!!

"I LOVE THISS ITS AMAZING "

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Yummy!!

"Unholy cow!! That was extreme! More please! 😍"

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Why does it have to end like that, you have definitely piqued my interest.Dammmm that's one hella of good novel.

"The characters,l love knight novels Soo gruesome both the fucking and war.will definitely recommend this novel to my friend "

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The dark Knight

"I've been really enjoying this novel so far, I love the slow burn romance coming one where they slowly realise their feelings for one another as well as the action and the setting. I usually don't read many books that date back in time, but I'm thoroughly enjoying this one. The one thing I would improve, however, would be clearly stating when the perspective changes. It's hard to keep track of who we're following in different parts. Other than that, it's a 5/5. I can't wait for the next update : )"

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Good idea, bad writing...(no offence)

"I loved the plot, the characters but the story could be more descriptive. You will make a wonderful author one day "

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The dark knight

"Marvelous story telling, compelling plot, also kinda funny , the dialogue is wonderful 🥰and the steamy scenes are written to make you very hot and very bothered 💦💦🌶️big ups to the author, am impressed. Please continue the story cause of my sparkling review 😂😂xoxo "

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