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Very engaging story

"Keep the readers curiosity up through out the story, though I didn't understand much if the different English dialect. Still the plot is nice. And story is written well. Nice one Author 😍"

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A detective mafia story that gets your heart pumping from the start. Also there's vampires. And witches

"There is little this story doesn't have. Vampires, magic, Dark Crystals, a mafia boss in the first chapter, it's awesome and I love how much ground this story covers. You won't be bored once reading it. Every chapter is exciting and very fast-paced. Sometimes a little too fast-paced--I had to backtrack a little to catch up with what was happening. But that's okay, it didn't affect my ability to have a blast while reading. It's so fun to learn about the vampires, and the magic system, and to uncover chapter-by-chapter a little more about the insane world the main character has been thrust into without much warning. There are so many creative ideas here and the characters are exquisite. I loved them all. Duncan in particular."

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"I like that its paranormal, but I enjoyed more, other books by same author. "

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