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Beautiful

"Told from a perspective that precious few of us who are young and thriving can slow down long enough to understand. In 11 short pages this story invokes a bitter empathy, and perhaps an acknowledgment of one's own mortality. Keep up the good work. 😊 Technical skills have room for improvement, but the heart is undoubtedly there."

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