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Wonderful!

"I really enjoyed this book. The characters were good and the storyline was excellent. I would have liked to have been a little bit more about Vincent. But either way it was fabulous great writing skills!"

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Lyall's story

"Another lovely story. I love all your characters. I enjoyed both stories from the wild forest pack and hope to see more."

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Lyall's story

"You did really well, and I'm glad you didn't drag it out. The potion scene was a little vague, and I'd say a little more back story intro for the pack, and for Lucy's family, could have been incorporated. I do look forward to reading more of your work! "

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