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A WoWing experience!🫨

"The plot is simple and moves forward, excellent. This story tells about a satanists family without the horror element and focus on psychology, social & spirituality, which is kinda rare because satanist without supernatural is not as famous. The character Lilith is outspoken and outrightly fearless against people who despise her, but she's also open-minded when she eventually accepts the bible. The narration is the first person's POV and dominated by telling with less showing, not necessarily bad. In fact, I liked Lilith's critical thinking. Although more dialogues and descriptive scenes would be very much appreciated. The resolution is the best part as Lilith learns to strengthen herself from both God and The Devil. Good and bad create harmony in our lives."

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Short and sweet

"It was a brilliant read! Honestly love the message (from what I understood) and the positive tones throughout. Love it x million💕😍 "

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