Back to Story

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Unfinished at chapter 5.

"This book hit all the marks I was hoping for- engaging plot, well-developed characters, and a satisfying narrative arc. However, it feels incomplete with only five chapters, leaving a sense that something went wrong or it needs further editing. The story seemed rushed, and I found myself wanting more depth and development. It’s clear there’s potential, but the brief length makes it feel like the book didn’t fully reach its potential. River L. De Clairmont. "

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Aloha Navy Boy

"Good story. Glad got different POV's. And that Nani got justice....the truth came out. "

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Romance novel

"Great story and characters. "

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Aloha Navy Boy

"Great story. It shows how changes can be made after a rape and the past can be changed. After the change and everything is revealed true love can be had"

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Aloha navy boy

"Really liked the story, nice plot!!!"

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