What is your opinion?
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"Wow, great job! Before I even started reading, the cover drew me in.. The plot so far is amazing and I like the way that you have different POV's with the characters. It really gets all sides of the story. Even while I read the summary, I didn't want to stop , so I continued on a rampage and finished reading it all 😂. My favorite genres are horror, thriller, and mystery so that also got me. The character development is also pretty good... I'm sure I'll get more of an understanding the more chapters are updated. I can't wait for more, you are an amazing author. Sincerely, Naomi H. 🩷"
Smile
"Okay, so I liked the story and the plot. It was an interesting one. I like how you portrayed the characters. And the clown seems very dangerous 😶😶😶. The scene where his mom clicks the photo and he sees a clown behind the tree was very scary. I liked everything. Okay, so I wished that the chapters could be small. About at least 10 pages. So in between I lost some interest as the chapter was too long. And when you are writing dialogue you need to start with a double quotation like "YEAH," and in some parts you have mixed the dialogues of two characters. So it was pretty confusing whose dialogue it was and I had to read it once again. And when you wrote SUMMER | 2008 | 2 CHARACTER, You could have highlighted that so it could bring more effect. It was a good chapter. Keep up the good work. Will read more when you upload it🙂"
Love the flow :)
"You provide a good structure for your story's flowchart, by which I mean the events. For your age, the technique is amazing and is bound further and greater improvements. My positive advice would be for grammar emphasize, and creating paragraphs for quotations so the chapters are proper, and look a tad more professional. If you could pull in on the sentence synchronization, I think your writing level will bump to such a level - keep your sentences connected so there less repetitive words! From a self-taught and trained writer, your work is impressive and would be stellar with time and improvements! All Love!"
