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Isa Dio

"Well written. Carefully considered, emotionally speaking. I'm more of a ninja-type who has no use for emotions, but I suppose the easily-offended have to be considered if an author do not want to be considered a psychopath, but all the falling tears and taking of moments to emotionally support and sympathise has always irritated me whenever I come across it. But that's just me. A nice human story for young readers."

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