What is your opinion?
This story is good!
"In my opinion, the story has a lot of potential for future chapters and when it gets revised. The plot is actually fairly interesting, but because it is still in its early stages, there is likely to be a lot of information about it that has not been presented in earlier chapters. I like how the main character isn't instantly powerful, like having an abundance of magical spells. I'm sure there's a convincing reason why the main character's physical ability exceed those of ordinary people in that world. This kind of story is interesting to me since it is a fast-paced action-adventure rather than slow-burning slice of life. I would want to see more lively interactions between the main character and the siblings. Considering that English is my second language, I can still understand the author's writing style, but I believe the author can improve it, even a bit. But, because this is your own story, just do anything you want. Do your best, author Ryvonne. "
The words are too length, author should summarize some passage and make it lively
"The intriguing character of the protagonist"
