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short review
"when I started I thought this would be another cliche billionaire love story but it seems the author has put a unique twist on the usual spiel. The concept was good. Your vocabulary was wonderful. Your writing style is really vivid and nice. I'm curious to see how things are going to end up. keep up the good work"
Great potential
"The story is really intriguing and I am sure it's going to be lovely. I like the fact we get to see the guy acting like an asshole and I am guessing that maybe after meeting the girl, he changes. My only complaint would be a few grammatical errors and that some of the Indian stuff could have been described in a better way for the non indian readers. But apart from that great job ! Keep going !"
