What is your opinion?
short review
"when I started I thought this would be another cliche billionaire love story but it seems the author has put a unique twist on the usual spiel. The concept was good. Your vocabulary was wonderful. Your writing style is really vivid and nice. I'm curious to see how things are going to end up. keep up the good work"
Great potential
"The story is really intriguing and I am sure it's going to be lovely. I like the fact we get to see the guy acting like an asshole and I am guessing that maybe after meeting the girl, he changes. My only complaint would be a few grammatical errors and that some of the Indian stuff could have been described in a better way for the non indian readers. But apart from that great job ! Keep going !"
Potential :>
"It's a story abandoned 3 years ago but I checked it out anyway. It's a quick read and a decent spin on the classic grumpy CEO man x feisty sunshine woman trope. I love how the characters didn't fall too much into stereotypes. They need improvement but they're all interesting, even the side characters. Tbh tho Avantika's justice seeking side could be more consistent. And darn, Arjun's coldness is sometimes over the top which make him just evil and annoying haha. Not a bad character but I don't like him at all. Also, the plot and pacing can be slowed down. Too many stories have this run-down structure. I want the details and all the emotions haha. But still, it's an easy read and the author knows how to play around these tropes. Sadly, the good part didn't start yet. Saddd I was looking for quick dopamine but oh well XD."
