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What is your opinion?

My Deo

"Please complete this intriguing piece of work. We are at the second moon. Oh,là,là!"

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My deo

"Good story still waiting for the test "

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My Deo

"I love the back stories and rules and regulations and I absolutely love the main and side characters and how they make the story come alive I wouldn't change anything about it that would definitely recommend this book to all my friends who love to read so thank you for writing this book"

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Amazing book

"This book is something I have been searching for so many times and Luckily came across, the book isn’t fully finished but it’s amazing and hope we see more of it. This genuinely had the best plot, I love everything about it. The grammar is a little off but it’s ok, "

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My Deo

"Very good book. Storyline is great, good job to the author but the updates are slow. More grease to your elbows. Kudos"

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Deo

"I just love this "

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Need more

"Need to read to the end. Please finish the book!🤩❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥"

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My Deo

"I really like it so far. Can't wait to see what happens and if there's more to her being an elf. "

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So far good

"So far good"

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Love it!

"I love it! I even sobbed on the story.."

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Good book,

"Good book, I enjoy reading it nice characters love the story very interesting barley waiting to read more ot find out the final part"

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My Deo

"I loved the book so far can’t wait to finish the entire book waiting on more chapters "

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Great

"I love the start of this book. The characters are well thought out and well described "

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Sweet but weird

"Perfect reading material,grammar is really good "

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Dragon

"I like it so far"

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Can’t stop reading this lol

"Defo recommend this "

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Just an observation.

"I just find it odd that the character Elvira is clever enough to sneak around, and yet she is not smart enough to figure out how upset she is making her mate. She also isn't thinking about what he might do with the info she is giving him. It's weird cuz earlier she was worried about him attacking the human kingdom and his reactions towards King Aden. "

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Creative

"Well formed base with background story for the different kingdoms. Interesting and captivating main characters."

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My Deo

"Grammar needs to be better. Like healed instead of held."

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