Holy flashback. Loved it

"I really liked your writing style, it is really hooking! The introduction of the Lady was really well done and I felt like the dialogue was one of the most natural ones I have ever read. However, Lynan experienced sudden surges of different feelings that I had some trouble understanding. Like one moment he was scared, the other at ease and then suddenly, he was excited to help. It was not the best twist at the end, but I still found most of the first chapter flowing nicely. That being said, the flashback and dream was so dramatic I loved it❤️. You described the burning perfectly and I could feel his trauma. Tip though, you don't need to use or repeat words like 'guilt' and 'trauma'. Let the setting and emotional conflict speak for itself! Still loved this chapter well done! "