what we see, and what we feel.
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what we see, and what we feel.

saaniv
saaniv1 story
LifeSorrowsHeartbreak PainOlderlovePain Love

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Summary

what we see, and what we feel is a collection of poems written by saaniv [saanvi] which expresses feelings that we experience and cherish. try being a lover. i said, TRY. to all the darling dreamers - 'words are just expressions, the meaning depends on the perceiver' with love, saaniv. [saanvi]

Genre
Other,Poetry
Author
saaniv
Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

some fool in us.

Some fool in us,

Dared believe.

Maybe we were too young,

And too naive.

Our love was too vague to accept,

But promises had to be kept.

Slowly, realisations crept upon us,

We thought our love didn’t make sense, but it does.

All night, we would weep,

But we had promises to keep.

We let go,

And our boat began to row.

Distance could never be a problem,

We had just begun to blossom.

It was time to move on,

We couldn’t have each other’s shoulders to lean on.

Some fool in us dared believe.

We thought we were too naive.

We thought a little teenage fling couldn’t hurt,

But it left us in ashes, burnt.

Every step we took might have been wrong,

But as we part, we won’t forget for long.

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