What is your opinion?
Another I enjoyed💜
"Hoping the series it's underway as would love to know what as happens to the 3 sisters and 3 brothers oh and elder brother Gio story too"
The Devils Angel
"This was an good book, but disappointed that it just ended in the middle of the storyline, I dont know if it continues into a other book"
Tracey
"What a cliff hanger can’t wait to see what happens next"
The devil's angel
"Omg this was so good and you left the story with a cliffhanger. I hope there is more to the story."
Laura
"Love this book. Really hope there will be more to the story soon"
The devil's angel
"It was a good story but where's the rest,?"
Good
"Sweet snd hot 😍"
Loved this💕
"Book 2 😫😭😭😭 nice short story"
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"Great storyline, but the spelling is not so great. I find it hard to read, and the words are mispelt, and the author switches the poverty unannounced for only a sentence or two, then switches back. Would love of this was run by an editor...."
My Review
"Okay I really don't like this story, sorry! It's okay regarding grammar and stuff so good job on that but... The plot is just.. No. There was just a girl falling for a guy and the guy falling for the girl a little while later and some cringe attachment the minute the girl gets his attention. You could've made the main character play a little more hard to get or added more of a story instead of just some flirting and that's it. I don't think anyone gets attached so quickly or easily, even if this is just a story. I also think the ending is just hanging on a cliffhanger (which is okay) but if you can add something serious like that, I think you could've added a story of the two main characters meeting and falling in love too. Sorry if this comes off as harsh but you can really work on your story because it has some potential if you spent more time on it. Thanks for sharing your story anyway! "
