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The Hive

"Bravo bravo bravo. This cinematic writing from this author is brilliant and captures the essence of a family in turmoil trying to hold it all together. His description of the people around him is spot on and makes me as disgusted as he is with his family. I want to jump into the story and rescue this kid. The juxtaposition of the Brilliance of the kid and the stupidity of this parents is written so well. He is one of my favorite writers."

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The Hive Situation

"A very enjoyable reading! The suspense was great! I found it so funny, it actually took me away from my reality, even just for a short, amusing time!"

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Captivating hilarious story

"Amazingly written real life story. It is funny and entertaining. It is written so vividly that I could see every scene unfold in my mind. The author's unique sense of humour adds to atmosphere of that story and makes it really funny. Apart of humour there is also sad reality of family life which often is far from great yet author managed to describe it in such an amazing way. Overall it's captivating funny story well worth reading. Great write!"

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A fun situation to read about!

"Well written, and the definition of situational comedy and comments. The narrative style seems perfect for these unusual stories. As always, every description is perfect to make me as a reader see exactly what's happening, and the writer's voice is sarcastic, funny, and insightful One of this author's best works so far. Comedy gold!"

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Well written

"Very nice and well written story. The style similar to Jim Butchers Dresden Files which I like very much. The only thing that detracts from the story is the constant labeling of idiots of the other family members. Just because the author is the only one in the family that can read at a high school level doesn't mean that the others are inferior beings. Limited horizons maybe but not idiots. Not everyone can follow to the stars. Otherwise than that well written. "

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