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Beauty Inside You
"You do a great characterization of the bullies, the bullies, bystanders, and instigators. It is a shame that the bullies show no remorse. They just continue to act out and show signs of displacement. Your short story is well done. I am glad the main character Peyton got the girl of his dreams and they know and have learned that true beauty lies within our minds and hearts."
Beaty inside you
"Makes me furious that bullies got away in this story. Bullies need to be punished for their actions "
