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Loved it!

"Ill start by saying I absolutely loved this. I binge-read it in a day and loved every single second. The plot was incredible and it left you guessing and making up theories. I will say that it got quite confusing, which is totally fair because it's a really complex plot. But the flashbacks sort of threw me off, especially that major one at the end that spanned so many chapters. It made sense by the end of the story but I was a teeny bit lost while reading. I also kind of wish the ending was a little happier - though I know its unrealistic to expect a perfect happily ever after. I wish 59 and Ava got to live freely. But its kind of amazing how the ending was written - they both were prisoners wanting to be free, and ended up in a vicious cycle at the very end, still trapped. It's kind of heartbreaking. Overall, this was an amazing read. I absolutely would read it again. "

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Loved it

"I can’t wait for book 2! I rlly enjoyed this read!!Compared to other stories I’ve read within this genre, this one had one of the most unique plots by far"

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Interesting plot development

"This story is great enough to make it easy to ignore the punctuation and occasional typos, which is normally hard for me to do. The build up for something coming is a bonus!"

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Epic thriller

"This book has kept me on the edge of my seat! The suspense and wonder are intense and have drawn me in to keep reading to discover more answers! This book is everything an avid reader loves, minus the typos and grammatical errors. I love the works of B Shock! Such an amazing mind! "

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Perfect

"Amazing book love the plot and suspense it really kept me interested and on the edge of my seat 10/10 would recommend i definitely wish it was longer "

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Keep you on edge of your seat

"Thank you for sharing your suspenseful imaginative narrative with us. You have creative descriptions and pull us into your characters personalities. Looking forward to part two."

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Subject -59

"The story was very confusing and suspenseful and I didn't understand it at first but I pushed through curiously and I'm glad I did. It became clear at the end of the story and I'm looking forward to reading the second book and checking out some of the other stories from this writer "

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Subject 59

"This story was amazing! Really had me in twists and turns the whole way through. Great writing and captivating plot - perfect monster kink 😘"

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Subject 59

"I love the story.It's unique and fresh and exhilarating.I can't wait to read more of your stuff. Can't get enough. "

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Not my favorite

"Let me start saying this is not my favorite type of story. I like the suspense, but I wish it was a more fast paced story. I understand people who love this genre really loved it, so if it is your thing then you will love this story. I also would have preferred more hit stuff , but it is just me. I am sure that fans of this type of stories will love it. It just was not my thing. Having said that, this author is my one of my favorite, nevertheless. ❤️ . I hope that if there is a second book it is more fast paced, because the plot is good. "

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Subject 59

"Wow! Mind blowing! Great read, keeps you on the edge of your seat haha thanks Author, for this fab work! the suspense was really killing me but it was worth it at the end! Thank you for sharing this story with everyone. Can't wait for Book 2. ❤️🥰"

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Subject 59

"Great story loved the fact that not all the characters were nice or friendly made it much more believable and realistic rather than have all the secondary characters either like or fall in love with the main female/male which is what you normally see in romance novels. Loved the dialoge and how it keeps you guessing right up til the end. I started reading and ended up reading it in one sitting cause i just had to see whsat happened next. The story progression was absolutely phenomenal and i believe that is what actually makes a great writer. It also allowed me to take what i was reading, and play it like a movie in my mind. Which is, to me, an ability only authors that are also great storytellers can inspire in me. I cant wait to read book 2 and only wish the author was accepting new subscribers so i could read some of the other stories by them that sadly say you need to be a subscriber to be able to read it like last to fall. But will recommend to every reader of every genre i know because i believe this author can be enjoyed by any reader, weather they like romance,hate it, or like me just usually dont read it because they are usually so predictable, because the author is just that good!"

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Subject-59

"This story is so ridiculously good!! You are a fantastic storyteller. This is one of those stories I couldn't stop thinking about for days after I was done reading it! My brain just kept going back and back to it! This would really make a fantastic movie - really great concept all around! Love all of your alien/sci-fi romances!! Well done!!"

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Amazing plotline and writing!

"I highly recommend this book as the plotline is so intriguing and interesting it will keep you hooked."

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Subject 59

"As usual you created a great story. Love the suspense and having us trying to figure out what is happening. Can't wait for book two, but first I want you to finish the last book of Alita and Azriel first. Keep going, you are a great writer. Loved all your books."

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S-59

"Some grammatical errors and typos but great read so far!"

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Subject-59

"Enjoyed the story. Will look for your sequel."

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A great story

"This was an amazing and suspenseful read. The plot twist was not obvious or predictable as often it is in other books (not by this author). Overall, a great book and the writing style is amazing too. It could use a little bit of grammar correction."

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Subject-59

"Loved this story!"

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It's a Refreshing Insight on how to Not judge a book by its Cover

"I enjoyed the Book,it kept me captivated and I liked the fact it gave me Reasons to think about certain aspects of humanity and what it truly means to be human "

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