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Don't really like the ending

"The rest of the book was great but the ending was bad for me. I didn't like the fact that everything was suddenly basically a dream of sorts for her and would have loved for all three of them to end up together."

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So fun!

"You really had me going! Lol. Enjoyed it "

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My review? .don't know what to do here .sorry

"Loved it! The plot in very unique and thrilling .I would definitely recommend it to mu others . already did to my sister.Rock it girl or boy whoever you are .☺️🙃"

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Bait & Switch

"Contrary to the author status, this book is not complete. You have to go to another p k atform to finish. I didn't bother to finish."

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Not too sure about that ending

"I would have given 5 stars rather than 3, but that ending... I dislike totally dystopian, hopeless stories. I also don't like miserable endings. The plot was very interesting, but ending in horror the way this did left me feeling cheated. Sure -- life can suck and lots of horrible things happen. Right now in 2025 in the US, we are facing a potentially dystopian destruction of our country with a dictator-wanna-be as president, and a selfish moron techno hacker in charge. Reality is depressing. I don't want to read stories that end up depressing. It feels like a waste of my time. The ending also didn't really make a lot of sense. It was rather incongruous"

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Not Complete

"The book claims to be complete, but it seems I'd need to go to another website to read the ending. I'm not a fan of the bait and switch."

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Sucks

"Sucked!!! I'd like to know how this NOT completed book wound up along side of the books that ARE TRUTHFULLY COMPLETED!!!!!! This should NOT be allowed!!!"

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