What is your opinion?
Lovely
"Impressive writing and perfect word choice make this a masterpiece. Your poem takes me to another world, it's peaceful."
The emotion behind certain lines was really powerful
"I liked the emotion of the poem and some lines I really liked. For example, the line about being sorry for their apology. That was my favourite line in your poem! I do suggest reading over your work before submitting it so that the fluency of your writing is flowier. Your lines are quite choppy for a poem. You should focus your message so that you know exactly what you want each line to lead up to. Sometimes, it's hard to connect poem lines with which message. Other than that I really liked your poem! "
Short Review
"Perhaps I had a difficult time appreciating your work because I'm so unfamiliar with the style. It's one hundred per cent unique and just as confusing. Half of what I read was repetition. I get the power of repetition in emphasis but you really overdid it. And it felt like each poem was the same but only slightly different. I think it wasn't till the 4th poem that I got a whiff of the use of a literary device. If these were the mad ravings of a spurned lover, I would completely understand the ranting. Also, some of the poems seemed almost lyrical, like they were written to be sung. That's a point in your favour to be honest. "
