What is your opinion?
A view from within
"I really enjoyed this story. I think you've perfectly captured the voice and tone of a person convinced that the things they do are right and just. Too often stories like this are just the act, and are missing the motivation, the inner driving force, and you've done a great job of conveying that without going overboard. Nicely written, I hope this is the first of many entries for you."
An interesting POV of a madman
"Reading stories like these, I always wonder if writers in different cultures would write madness in the same way. There's something very American fundamentalist about this killer's ideology and motivation that I find interesting. There's a madonna/whore complex thing going on, and a desire to "save" someone who sounds like she's already in trouble. The lead character would be a great centerpiece for a very dark and depressing novel. I enjoyed it."
