What is your opinion?
Really Good!
"It's a fun adventure from start to finish, with the good fantasy school vibes that I really like 👍 I definitely recommend it! I'm looking forward to seeing what the main characters will learn and do in the school, for sure :] "
✨Amazing ✨
"I read this 1 chapter of this book maybe 2 days ago but I forgot to write review so here it is. Really nice plot 10/10 and I like this bond of the family and it gives me really good feelings. I am excited to see the the main character go to the elemental high and see the upside downs it brings. Nothing I love more than to see an author build a fiction world and share it with her readers. I would for the upcoming chapters. 🖤🖤🖤"
Awesome!
"It's a great story, and reading it online gives it so much more detail than what you've told me in person, hehe. And I noticed you changed the tense from present to past a couple times, not saying you have to edit that, but it may confuse some readers. But overall I LOVE IT!"
I like it
"it was good, but I saw some grammar issues. Just as a helpful tip; But comes after a coma."
Friend of Moonlight that doesn't have Inkitt
"I like the characters, it's very flowing. I think the writing is cool and I personally think it's very ethical. The tribes are all so cool and I like that the characters aren't made of their element like that Elemental movie and that they are actually humans with really cool powers. I would not fix anything and it is so creative! Keep up the good work! - A kid at my school, (Moonlight did not write this!)"



