What is your opinion?
An unique story
"I like how the writer write this story. The sentences are clear and I enjoy to read it. Good job."
Quite wordy but stick with it
"I took a while to get into the author’s writing style and found parts which would probably could have been edited out as un-necessary. However, the author is obviously passionate about writing, words and language and this comes across in their story. As Israel’s tale develops you can see character growth and development, with it ending on a good note. "

