Excellent!

"This has been a super enjoyable read. A lot of the times when I give reviews, I'll skim through a few chapters, but I found myself reading every single word of the 4 chapters available at the time of this review. The prologue does exactly as it's meant to. I think a lot of stories that include prologues don't need them/they don't add anything to the story, but that is not the case for this story - so kudos. I also think you have a strong first chapter that sets the scene of our characters and their relationships with one another, and we love a good action scene. There's also an element of mystery you've added in in multiple layers, which gives a lot for the reader to wonder about. Grammatically, I didn't notice anything substantial or really much at all, so good job. The only criticism I have is a small one, but during the interrogation with the cop I was a little confused as to the questions that were being asked. Maybe that's because I don't know much about Park Ranger lingo, but that conversation was a little hard to follow and I just couldn't understand what was being asked or why, so maybe a little bit more clarity in that conversation would be helpful (even just adding more dialogue tags there cuz I found myself losing track of who was talking) Overall, though, this is an excellent story. I'd give it 10 stars if I could. Highly recommend this to anyone who wants something new/different on this platform, since this is definitely super original in the wolf-genre (and I'm anxiously anticipating when the romance part takes more of a front seat, since that's what I'm a sucker for!)"