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Wonderful story

"The plot was extremely good and I really loved the story. There were no loopholes or flaws in the story. The only problem was the grammar that made it challenging if that can be rectified then this book definitely be a masterpiece."

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Love out of spite

"I love your story..you are a good writer because each chapter is never a boring chapter"

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Love out of spite

"Love the story ❤️❤️❤️"

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Love Out of Spite

"A very entertaining historical fiction . Keep writing ! Thank you for an enjoyable HEA love story "

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Loved

"One of the best on inkitt highly recommended ❤️"

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Love Out of Spite

"Delightful story. Loved how they both tried to keep they true feelings in. Only to have it all come out in the end. And ended up happily ever"

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Awesome

"Great love story with many twists and turns "

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Love Out of Spite

"Good story. Just confusing bc of the he/him when talking about Charlotte.......and some other wording issues. But after getting those figured out......good story. Feel SOOOO sorry for James!!! CAN'T wait to see what he's hiding from/about Charlotte."

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Love out of spite

"The grammar was terrible yet a very good plot"

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It's a good story

"Not really liking the pronouns used when it's applied to a character in the store. Say who it is and what they are doing. Don't make it so "woke" "

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Bad vocabulary

"Plot is very intriguing but the grammatical errors make this novel seem more like auto-translated from some other language. It disturbs the flow and interest."

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Would you be updating?

"Great story, would you be updating?"

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