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What is your opinion?
Very interesting.
"1. I don't appreciate he went to the direction of the scream, it gave me an heartattack. 2. Really got scared when the snake's tale dragged away from the camera. 3. Very impressive story line. "
A good read
"The story is good although I had different expectations from the summary of the story abd the cover. I also felt that the story could have been expanded a bit more and not feel so rushed. But if this us your first story then it's fine, you did a great job ! Nonetheless the story is really good"
