What is your opinion?
My Opinion
"I can't express how much I love this story, it was just wow! I like how each chapter was based on each victim that got their punishsment and I would be lying if I didn't sa I got a little hungry while reading. I've never read a story with this kind of take, it honestly great. I love how Sage spoke about some of the victims especially saying the good things about them and speaking out against their cruel punishments. Master-N is a interesting character I wasn't expecting that he had something to do with Shane's family and their demise but I was happy to see that Sage got his happy ending. AKon you have a talent for storytelling I can tell you that :)"
Short Review
"There are certain elements that combine to make a good thriller. Action verbs. Short sentences. Dialogue. Short paragraphs. Plot twists. Dynamic characters. Action. The story lacks dialogue completely. This alone put me off from the first chapter. Reading a conversation as a paragraph gets old very quickly whereas dialogue allows room for the writer to include verbal queues and help the reader get to know more about the characters. The longer the paragraphs, the more difficult it is to stay focused on it. This is a thriller story, and keeping the reader's interest is the primary job. The only plot twist was the impending doom the guests at the dinner were to meet. That was a good start. Unfortunately, that was also where it ended. We are not properly introduced to the other characters except Sage. I find it to be very strange that a group of strangers would show up at a dinner and not be curious about each other. The interaction between the characters would have enriched the story had the author bothered to include it. The author has a uniquely brilliant idea in terms of the plot but more work needs to be done to get the intended effect. "
