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Update

"Need new update!!"

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Romance novel

"Great story line. Awesome characters. Enjoyable read 😁"

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Grammar

"Grammar needs hella work, but the story itself is fantastic. Keep it up!"

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Great novel so far..

"I love the novel so far, but I feel like the plot is everywhere, and everyone is switching lovers (which i really dislike), and I'd love to see some stability with relationships. And I feel like and claire into the mix was odd and unnecessary she seems irrelevant, but it's like they're trying to make her the new plot of the story. I feel like Claire's needs and traumatic life is disrupting the actual plot of the crew and shay. And I dislike how naive they've made malisa to Shays antics, the outburst on the stairs where she makes it clear she's envious of malisa was a red flag no one would consciously ignore. Hopefully they don't drag out malisa and her friends' obliviousness to shay to long cause I'm already annoyed. Other than those points the novel has a lot of amazing potential!"

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Malisa's Summer

"Lovely script and the uodates are on tegilqr time The reader doesnt loose interest. Well Done "

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