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Double trouble

"The details are very intense. I felt like I was rose. I think the men sound equally delicious. Like 2 sides of a coin. "

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Good so far

"I’m liking the humour in these scenes! "

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Really enjoyed

"Just finished and I really enjoyed this. I really hope there is more to come. "

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Jackal

"Grammar makes it hard to follow"

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Getting warmer

"I’m enjoying the growing heat yet at the same time I’m struggling to find the plot believable. Good story for those who aren’t too rigid about strong writing and believability! "

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