What is your opinion?
Bad grammar
"The writers use of English Language was bad"
Love reading Andy and Arthur conversation...
"Quite cute how Andy is clueless about how the male athlete feels about her. Wish I could read the new chapter. "
Interesting Story
"The story itself is quite interesting (i love basketball) its just there is one recurring issue, the grammar isn't the best. There are many grammatical errors, but that'll improve as time goes on and the more you write, besides that, great read"
Sweet 25 - review
"The story has an interesting, romantic, sports theme, however, there are quite some difficulties with grammar and overall writing. I'd suggest the author to use Grammarly (is for free) or some other writing application- it will help to sort out at least some basics. Also keep to one tense (whether be that present or past), there's quite a lot of shifting and mixing of tenses, which affects negatively the reading. I think the idea is nice, but writing needs work. The detailed scenes of the basketball match were interesting and intense. I also liked the characters. Keep working on it. Good luck!"
I like where the story is going but the grammatical errors are quite much. I understand that most of them might just be typos. It's nice. I'll continue reading the story. Please update.☺️
"I liked the plot. The grammatical errors, not so much. I know you'll do better. I wouldn't recommend it now because of the errors but when they are corrected, I will."
okay
"I like where the story is going, but I think there should be dialogue at the beginning of the story as well. To show the main characters personality. I was also a bit confused on what was going on in the arena. But nevertheless it's an okay story."
