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Dumuzi

"It's not like the others. This one is ethereal .. but yeah, not the ending I would like .. overall, I liked the plot and the story though it's kinda short I guess.. thank you!"

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The rapture

"Absolutely amazing book completely loved it from beginning to end can't wait to read book 2😊"

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Excellent book

"Love this book"

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THE RAPTURE

" Love Pearl & Dumuzi This book had several SCENES that literally made me scream “AH” out loud. I think it’s why I loved it so much This book was so amazing, Ahhhhhh this book just had so much to take in at once, my jaw was literally on the floor by the end of it. Can't wait for the second book "

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The Rapture

"I really liked where this book was going but then it just stopped!?!! I realize there is book two but it’s two other characters. "

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The Rapture

"A beautiful well written story about love, the characters are so thought out and brought to life by the author. Thank you for an escape from the problems of every day living. "

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Rapture

"J’aime le caractère tortueux des personnages , ils sont complexes et adorables, je ne sais pas noter le style ni la grammaire ni l’orthographe moi qui suit francophone et juste des bases scolaires d anglais. mais j’ai su le lire assez facilement, bien sûr, j’ai dû chercher certains mots qui n’étaient pas dans ma base de mémoire depuis presque 35 ans que je n’ai plus parlé l’anglais Mais je le recommande très fort, j’ai adoré le livre ml si pour lire la suite je n’ai pas noté certains chapitre"

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Awesome

"I love the nurodivergant inclusiveness. As well as the MC not being completely stupid. I like the writing style and the pace of the book as well. As someone who is dyslexic I'm not catching misspellings or Grammer because I just can't. "

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Don't stop!

"All the stars all across the board this story sucked me in like a black hole since I found it ah I don't want this to end "

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5 stars across the board

"I stumbled upon this book much to my joy! Such a captivating story I’ve really enjoy it so far can’t wait for the next upload. Please upload soon! Absolutely love it can’t wait to see what other books are to come. "

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It was good

"It was sooo good I almost cried "

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The rapture

"I am really into this story I think dumuzu is fantastic and pearl is pregnant he will love her to bits x"

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Love it

"Saving this one to my library it’s a grate read am lucky I ran into it❤️"

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Awesome read so far

"Can't wait for more updates.saving this in my library so that I can get notices when you update Kudos"

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Smooth read

"I am enjoying the storyline thus far. It is very interesting and invites curiosity from the readers. Can’t wait to see what happens next. "

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Can you make it kinkier if you know what i mean

"About your style of writing. I wanted to ask if you could use more kinky dialogue , don't hold back. Trust me when I say we are just here for the erotic sex so dirtier word play would be great. Otherwise this was great"

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The rapture

"More focus on the plot, development of chapters more. I like the story line but too past paced for my liking. Yes i could recommend to others. This rating showed my opinion of the book"

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