What is your opinion?
Ratground
"I can't say much about the plot yet since I'm reviewing at 1 chapter, so I can't really see 100% where it's going and where the horror aspect is going to come into play, besides the fact that addiction in and of itself is horrifying. In that regard, I do think maybe the age rating should be 18+ since this story is dealing with a very adult topic. Even if there isn't any violence or explicit sex, just the world of drug use and such (if you're really going to dive deep into that, which I'm guessing you are) should maybe be for 18+ but that's just me personally. Overall, I think the writing style is good. It's very narration forward, not a lot of dialogue or action yet, which I personally enjoy in stories. I like when authors delve deep into someone's thought process, motivations, etc, so in that way, this is very strong. However, I would think a lot of readers will maybe want to see more dialogue and action later on. It's a great start and it'll be interesting to see where it goes from here. Good luck :)"
Short Review
"It took me longer than usual to review this story even though it was just one chapter because I wanted to make sure I truly appreciated the story. Even after re-reading it, I just couldn't figure out where the horror part would be coming in. Not to mention the distinct lack of dialogue and action that make any good writing complete. All in all, the author has a long way to go to make this shelf-ready but it's a decent attempt. "
