What is your opinion?
Intriguing!
"Brittany Bell, the Author, knows how to write fun and intriguing stories. There's a beautiful love story wrapped up with loving, caring families. I enjoyed these novels."
Fantastic
"Cute plot, can not wait to read more!"
Romance novel
"Great story line. Very sexy and awesome characters. "
Game One
"I'm reviewing at one chapter, so I can't say too much about the plot because it hasn't had time to develop yet. However, based on the setup, it looks like it's going to be a tried-and-true romance "brother's best friend" type story, which is great. No need to reinvent the wheel, and hopefully the author will bring in something to give it a unique flair to set it apart from other stories of this genre. As far as the writing style, I think it suffers from telling instead of showing. And the pace is super fast. We barely get to settle into the setting and who our MC is before we're introduced to the love interest. I'd love to get more of a setup about what is going on around her and what her life is like to create a bit more anticipation for when the love interest will arrive. Also, when she describes the love interest, the way she describes being attracted to him also feels a little fast. Then again, this is a romance so it's not abnormal for things like this to happen, but I'd like to see a bit more realism/slowing things down in that regard. The chapter is super short and a lot happens in it. I feel like for what happens in this chapter you could separate it into three and really take your time to set things up and create some engaging characters/setting/and tension. For grammatical/technical stuff, I didn't see many errors - Again, this is the first chapter, so there's not much to go on. But it seems good so far. All in all, I think some stuff with the style needs to be addressed, but technically and plot wise, you're good to go. Good luck!"
