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Lots of drama and bad guys

"The author has a good story here. The plot has death, suspense bad guys and romance. The characters are strong both good and bad. The story does need editing...a lot but if that doesn't bother you I'd check it out. This author is talented."

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Deadly Desires

"Great short story. Full of action , drama and intrigue. Love is a great Karma to those who need it "

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Deadly Desires

"The plot of this story is intriguing, and the internal conflict between the characters shows the authors insight of people’s emotions. I rated it as I did because I felt as though even though readers are aware of the strife of the characters it could have been more deeply conveyed "

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