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Bibi

"-I liked the chemistry between the leads -I wish the author was abit more descriptive with some of the chapters,she couldve given them more life that way"

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It’s so freaking good that my heart is racing

"I usually don’t read on screen because it doesn’t have the same experience like hard book but because of this masterpiece i really enjoy reading on a screen"

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Luna to my alpha stepbrother

"A very interesting book to read❤️"

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The alpha’s mate

"Well written and suspenseful. Vinson’ s mean behavior was kind of predictable of how he would end up loving his little butterfly. "

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Hurting the one you love

"I dislike the way hurt his little butterfly. I hated they way she was treated by the pack, her father and stepmother.I cannot wait to find out why he marked her in so many places. Adelaide is an evil person and I happy that he finally rejected her."

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Mated by my step brother

"I love the story line and suspense "

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Good

"I am loving the story, my friend. Is good "

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Luna to my alpha stepbrother

"I like the suspense we don't know the full story behind Vins actions yet though we can guess , I would recommend this to friends who share my love for these style stories , this rating is based on what I've read so far , it's interesting and well written! "

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Good

"Good book,lovely"

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Grammar

"Multiple spelling errors and mixed sentence construction "

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Good 😊

"I liked everything about the novel the description the narration the background detailing everything is great "

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Luna to my Alpha Step brother

"Captivating story."

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Luna to my Alpa Step brother

"Just wondering if you are going to be finishing your story?"

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Perfect

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Awesome

"The storyline and character development are right on point with a few spelling errors but all the author’s messages and comments are very clear and helpful in understanding what is being written and how to use it in future chapters ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❣️❣️ I absolutely love this story and am so engaged with the characters emotions and drama within the story ❣️❣️❣️ Great writing and presentation by the author 🙏😇🙏🥰🥰🥰"

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Superb and enticingly good words that sought your inner imagination

"This one is one of the best supernatural story that I came across. It may not be anywhere near progressive but the author is such a talented story teller with no girly talk. It's purely animal talk and more."

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Exited

"Yessss team roryy!!!❤️💖"

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Great book

"I am enjoying the plot line and twists in each chapter thus far "

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Exciting!

"Can’t wait for the next chapters!"

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Gamna

"Good story line so far"

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