What is your opinion?
A MUST READ!!!
"You need to read this story, it’s definitely worth you time and I enjoyed every chapter. Excellent writing and storytelling, takes you on a journey. I would highly recommend to anyone and everyone! "
Enjoyable
"This is a good story worth the read. Well done author."
Saving phoebe
"I loved it so much 😍 Thank you author for this amazing story 🤩🤩🤩🤩"
A good read
"Phoebe's story is heartbreaking, and it was hard to keep dried eyes in some chapters. Learning more about Nix, you can see how these broken pairs ended up finding solace with each other. The story is short and may feel fast-paced, but, to me, it's written as it should be. I'm excited to read the spinoff book."
Saving Phoebe
"I think overall, the story is really good! The summary could use a little work, it was slightly confusing - and that's something you want to be very clear and straight to the point. I also don't think the prologue is necessary, it doesn't really add much suspense-wise since it is so short. I think you'd be better off going right into the first chapter, since it has a good hook more than the prologue. The plot in and of itself is really cool. I like the idea of these two kids meeting again after a mysterious incident and then it slowly coming out. It reminds me of "Little Fires Everywhere" honestly, which is awesome. Only critique would be that the drama is slightly like middle school/high school-ish. College students, in my experience, just don't act that way unless you're at a super super small private school or within a sorority/fraternity. And on one hand, I understand that her having sexual trauma is part of her character especially the CSA and those traumas do tend to compound each other, but it seems like a new person is assaulting her like every chapter, and you might be better off keeping it to one or two antagonists. Cause the revenge plot with Phoenix is good enough and then having the sort of backstory that comes out with the main "villain" in that and then another more present-day villain is enough. The other stuff just feels like overkill a bit, but that's just me. I think for the writing style, you'd benefit from more showing rather than telling. We get A LOT of backstory information from sort of journal-like narration where it seems she's talking to us about who people are and what they did. I like the use of flashback a lot more than that, so I'd lean into using that for all the stuff in the past and then express the rest through dialogue. It just feels sometimes that I'm not really in the scene as an observer happening real time, but more having it recounted to me by someone - so I think changing that up so it feels a little more immersive would be good. Technically, I didn't notice anything, so good on that! So, overall, great job, very original idea, interesting characters and relationships. Kudos :)"
Good quick read
"I really enjoyed this short story. I think it would've been great to be a bit longer - the characters have so many stories to tell. The authors writing is very clear and smooth. There are limited errors that do not interfere with the reading (I think there were only two that I can remember). This was both heartbreaking and heartwarming. I usually don't read the content warnings, only because I don't like to pre-judge as I begin a book. If you have triggers, read those closely to make sure you are OK with the material, but if you are ok with reading sensitive content and looking for a story, this is a good one. When it comes to content, there are no overly graphic details pertaining to child abuse. As I mentioned, I would love to see more in the story of the characters. The author was great at changing POV's but if turned into a novel, there are several ways to evolve the characters - who they are, where they are from, specifically why do they think and act the way they do. With that being said, for it being a short story, it is still well written and still feels complete. "
My knix
"Great book!!"
