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What is your opinion?
Awesome!
"Loving this so much. An absolute page Turner. "
Interesting Start
"The story is interesting, and the concepts in "My Adventure" are intriguing to read about. I loved the way the author used dream sequences to show some of the important moments in the story. I do think though that there are moments where there is a lot of telling in the story and those places can be reworded, but the story does have great potential with some editing! Can't wait to see where the story goes next! I'll leave comments for the author below. **NOTES FOR THE AUTHOR ARE BELOW THE REVIEW. :)"
