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Awesome

"Love the story"

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Forsaken and Fated

"This story was ok dont know why i havw to leave anything about this on here. Up to the last page and hub"

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Excellent Novel

"Absolutely loving the characters!! Are you a secret Harlequin Novelist?? Just jokes!! I’m feeling your writing style. Your characters have character! Pretty Please, promise me you will keep writing this story.. Hope to say more later."

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Forsaken or fated

"Love the story polt of this book I would recommend it to friends "

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21 chapter read

"Can’t wait to see where did Elian go? What will Alan do? Is Elian, Alan mate or not ? Can’t wait for next chapters. Please update soon"

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I like Elaine

"Great story i can’t wait for her wolf to appear "

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Nice

"Not bad liking is so far😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😗😗😀😗😗😀😀"

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Something with wolves

"I am really enjoying the book so far and I'm now irritated I can't continue to read because of this."

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Review

"Wish story was complete. Good story so far"

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A great novel

"What I liked will I liked it all so the story it’s self and all of it so I hope that there is more and can’t wait to see what happens and hope they get to together  "

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Review

"I love this story, it's very different from the others I have read. What I didn't like so much was that the different points of view were changing and there wasn't anything indicating that it was happening "

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Forsaken and fated

"I love the story so far can't wait to see what happens with Alan and Elaine!!!"

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Fated forsaken fierce

"I wanna lean to be stronger to come into her own and to find her wolf. I think it’s starting to happen now the story is getting a little bit better please carry on."

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Forsaken and fated

"I liked the mixture of love , hatred and sorrow in the novel. I didn't like how the author made the alpha weak instead of head strong with aura. I will definitely share it with a friend"

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Good

"Good,needs proofing "

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Like

" I really like the story line and am interested in seeing what direction the author takes. The character development is good."

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Mate

"Interesting story"

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Good

"Cant wait for the next chapter.. it it finished already mabshe"

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Unsure where it's going, but definitely interested!

"The antagonists are a bit too far gone/static evil for my liking... the most believable villains are more complex than these seem to be. Other than that, bravo! Well written and thought out in many ways. I look forward to finishing the story!"

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