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REVIEW (Teaser Only)... I'm buying the book though! :)

"What a trip lol. We need more unique and spicy stories like this in the genre. As they say, variety is the spice of life! :P This is unlike anything I have read on here. Things can often seem so cookie-cutter and uninteresting. Uninspired. Predictable. I lose interest. Good characters, dialogue and writing. The personalities of each character are distinct and well thought out, from their actions to speech. They are not dull puppets. Pulls you into the story. The general grammar is well thought out and straight to the point; things do not ramble and drag on without reason. Does not come off as being too serious or seeming pretentious, which I think is a good thing for a story like this. It is descriptive in a way that makes it easy to visualise these wacky/spicy harem scenarios haha. Each chapter ends in a neat little package with a dash of mystery on top. A lot of fun to read (and top notch weird spicy scenes). I have only read the teaser but will write a proper review after I get my hands on the full thing! Very nice work, author! You have a big imagination and a creative mind. It seems you put a lot of thought into the details of everything surrounding this from what I have consumed so far. It shows. Stand out style. You have created an interesting world. I appreciate that. I’ll be back to browse your other works. I honestly can't find a single bad thing to say about this... besides the fact there were only 5 chapters available! :P "

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Book 1

"Interesting "

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Test Subject

"Incredible book with what little I was able to access"

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Test subject

"A must read "

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Blair

"Definitely loved the short little bit that i read it was awesome💙"

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Need a word stronger than loved

"I read this on Galatea but wanted to add review here. I absolutely loved this story!! The storyline is unique, the interaction with the monsters are 🌶️ and surprising love story is so sweet. Just finished book 2 and was just as good and just as 🌶️. Keep writing them please!"

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INCREDIBLE

"I absolutely love this even tho I cant fully read it here I wish I could!!! The idea that you came up with was very creative and I've never seen this kind of work so far!! I think you could go back through and correct some grammar but other than that I ADORE THIS "

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This it hot

"Can see/hear all of it....yes. Just yes. "

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Hot and then so annoying to stop

"This book really is so up my alley and then to just stop and say read the rest elsewhere and oh you have to pay to read it is not cool. Should share that fact at the start!!!"

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Where could I read the rest?

"Where's the rest? 🥹😭"

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Test Subject

"Wonderful book hope to read more in the future from author "

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Too Short

"Just as I am really getting into it, it's done. Can't wait for more."

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Test Subject #1 by ILove2Play

"I have actually read this book on Galatea. So neat to see it started here. Truly a great book to read in its entirety. Highly recommend it!"

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Yes

"I need this book "

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Amazing

"Amazing g want .ore"

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Keep me in the edge

"This one keep me on the edge. Would read this one over and over again"

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Wonderlous

"Everything every thought about other entities was well thought out in this teaser. More please 🌶️🔥🔥🔥🔥"

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Amazing

"Absolutely loved this chapter. So bummed that it's just a teaser though. Just as it got interesting"

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Hot AF!

"This book is a teaser for a longer version, which is the only downside. But the monstrous erotica is fantastic and I would definitely recommend it to anyone who enjoys monstersex erotica. "

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So not cool

"You should warm that what we are about to read is only a small portion of the story. "

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