What is your opinion?
Where is the rest of the book?
"This was good but just stopped…. Totally a waste of time!"
Behind The Veneers
"The story line is a good one. Characters are well developed, where I see some issues is where the author uses too many fancy words ( although appropriate in their meaning) in my humble opinion it may cause your audience to get distract it from what the author wants convey ( not that the audience is illiterate) I just think that most people get involve in a story just to take a break from the complexity of every day life, not to add complexity to their down time :)the paragraph repetition was also distracting however, that could have been an error of the site..?. Over all I really think that the author is awesome and I can’t wait to see more of her work. :) "
Naive
"Elongating and repeating same paragraphs and same words with very little action "
