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Appreciation and Commission Request

"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "

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What a twist

"Thank you for writing this interesting tale."

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Fantastic story

"I really enjoyed reading this book. The story was well written and had me in the edge of my seat waiting for more. I found it hard to put down. People who like dystopian universes with a unique story and a supernatural element will be well suited to this book. Looking forward to the next book from Popcorn rat. "

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Brilliant read great story

"What a great story, enjoyed reading this and very well written."

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Great read

"I enjoyed the story, Willow comes over as a very likable character. Nicely written. "

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