What is your opinion?
Please make more chapters thank you
"I love the back story so far about the kids parents dying but I feel like you could go more in depth about it and it said the serlings his sister said that they owed the kid family a debit I was wondering if you could go into depth on that two and I hope you make more chapters I love your work it's really one of my top 5 favorite online books I truly hope you make more chapters for this book "
Descriptive writing
"He story is well written and very descriptive in nature, the style of the story reminds me of one of my favourite authors . Her writing style is well produced and received by many readers all over the world. Good job. The only thing I found lacking is the pace, at certain times when the story is being told, the speed is reduced to a crawl as the description of details, in the setting up of the scene is not always necessary, as some details have been repeated quite frequently. But this is not necessarily a bad thing unless the reader is impatient."
